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Are Early Marriages More Likely To End In Divorces

 

Draft:

 

Introduction- Discuss about the staement, give brief explanation about the early marriages

 

Body        - 2 points on pros (2 paragraph)

              a. Marital knowledge

              b. Social problem

            - 2 points on cons (2 paragraph)

              a. Chemistry between the couple/understanding

              b. Problems such as financial problem

 

Conclusion  - Give my opinion, my statement after all and simple values for the readers

 

 

Essay

 

     Early marriages are normal things than happen nowadays and we can say it as a trend for the young generation.As the reminder, we should know that there are pros and cons regarding to this matter.

 

   First is about relationship. Even if we marry at young age but we already have the knowledge of building up a family, so there should not be a problem to the couples themselves. This is important because without the knowledge, the relationship will not lasts so long and indirectly it leads to the separation of the famiy. Therefore, there is a need for couple to attend a course before marry just to make sure they have the values of loving the relationship.

 

   Apart from that, we should see this matter as a positive thing. Early marriages can prevent all those bad social problems to be happened. Introduction of all modern tools nowadays affect the capability to think wisely and critically for the teenagers. As example, marriage can avoid teenagers especially to get involved with rape cases as well as to involve with other problem. In order to have a long lasting relationship, the couples should have good intention before building up the family.

 

   In the other way around, we can see early marriages can lead in divorces. It is all about the chemistry between the couple. If we get married at young age, it means we will see the same face, attitudes and habits for many years. For those couple who do not have mutual understanding, they will fed-up with each other and it will end up in divorce. It goes back to our immaturality that make insane decision in a very hard time.

 

   Besides that, early marriges can lead in divorces due to the certain problems. The most common problem is financial problem. This is because they do not have fix income to support the family needs such as to buy milk for baby and to give pocket money to the wife. This matter can disturb their emotion and feeling especially to the husband. Eventuall, the young husband will take easy way to get out from this problem by divorcing their wife. It also can lead to problems where the husband overpowering their wife and start to injure them.

 

      In conclusion, I am not agree if we say that early marriages more likely to end in divorces because nothing is impossible. The thing is we should be a responsible person to the God, parents, soulmate as well as the society.